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Sophia Ella's avatar

This chapter feels like quiet chaos wrapped in something beautiful, Atlas seeing dignity where Nessa only saw shame hit hard.

And that ending… the timeline glitch isn’t just scary, it feels personal now.

Are you slowly turning her into the world she tried to escape, or something even worse?

Marcin Pilarczyk's avatar

To be honest, I am not entirely sure how it ends as most of the ideas come from my 15-yo daughter ;)

It will be bittersweet for sure.

Sophia Ella's avatar

Wow, that’s so cool! I love that your daughter inspires parts of the story. Btw if you don't mind can we chat in dm sometime? I got a really interesting idea in mind which I'd love to discuss together if you're open to it.